my great lyricism

[ozsupra]

I am going to follow this post with a series of 3 songs ove written i want all of ya to tell me what is the best how good each of them are and dont be scared to tell me they are shit these are the 3 first songs ive written in over 2 years so tell me honsetly what you think....

[ozsupra]

your the only one for me the only one i love
your like the queen dove
i love you with all my heart
its not only because your so smart
but your so damm hot
your betta than the lot
the sweetest i know
and one of the only that dont act like a hoe
i love your more than earth
from the day of your birth
people wulda wished they were you
but no1 can you are the one and only you
n your the one i love

[ozsupra]

Guy

I know your not a kid no more
but i never knew you were some kinda whore
just the other day i opened your door
i see you beggn the man you just fucked for more
coz you were poor?
i thought you were rich
what are you some kinda bitch
I got that right coz now i know your a hooker
at least the guy was a good looker

just yesterday you denied all this
but is saw it and i saw that list
still you tell me no
all i can think is your some kinda hoe

Chick

Im know im not a kid no more
and i aint no whore
when you came to my house and opened the door
you saw me beggn but it wasnt for more
he just commited rape
i have it all on tape
i was pleading with him to stop
but he pushed me back over spread my legs and he was on top
for another half hour
i yelled out but it only became more sour
but i gotta say his cock was like a tower

oh yes and i am rich
I sometimes act like a bitch
before you ask if i brought it on me
well no cant a girl wear what they want
its like you cant you have to be carefull
just like making sure you use the right font

That say i just wanted to pass out
I couldnt i even tried to knock myself out
and there you were you could have helped
you just walked away
wat you saw wasnt me being a hooker
it was RAPE
like i said i have it all on TAPE

Guy

yes yes ive heard all this before
how can it be when your not even sore
where are the signs of struggle?

Chick

why dont you believe me
i thought you were a friend
maybe this is the end....

[ozsupra]

At least my attempt to rhyme
was worth a dime
yours aint worth a thing
but you walk around with your "bling bling"
you think your some kinda king
you aint gotta thing
your such a fool, ya tool
why do you think your so cool?
your rhymes stunk like cow manure
actually even thats more pure
id rather hear fewer
of your less than pure cow manure
what is up with you
you think your black
now that shit is wack
you walk around in your dada
but a 2 year old can rhyme harder
my lyrics are at least worthy
yours are just damm right dirty
i thought we were friends
cmon now i just crucified you its the end

all im being is honest
i bet you'll read this and still think your strongest
cmon your shit wont make santas sack
not even for the bad kids that is wack
take your time
next time you wanna rhyme
come and see me
remember i even showed you how to pee
let it be
its over now 1, 2, 3